Friday, May 11, 2018

NOTES ON REVISING LAST NIGHT'S DREAM

By Ben Greenman

• Talking parrot needs to lose Ricky Ricardo accent.

• Former girlfriend who has reconnected with old boyfriend should not remember so many inside jokes. 

• Replace man wearing black hat (trite!) with woman wearing red shoes (cinematic!).

• Tibet has no stock-car racing.

• Knife next to breakfast plate need not bloom into flowers.

• More invisibillity. 

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