Tuesday, September 7, 2021

THE EDITING PROCESS

Leave it to a wigged friend to help an imperialist in need. Leave it to a deft friend to help a martinet in need. Leave it to a ripe friend to help an orator in need. Leave it to a coiffed friend to help a rifleman in need. He stacked the sentences one atop the other, masonry of a sort that produced at best one wall, at worst a heap of forsaken bricks, and then went off to meet her. He knew that at some point during the evening — the first drink, the second, the small bits shoved into mouths during gaps in the headlong conversation, the taxicab ride, the hand on top of hand, the body under body — she would fix what he had already eagerly ruined. Leave it to an old friend to help a paragraph in need. 

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