David — Title.
Paula — First sentence.
Ross — Most of the character names.
Travis — Whatever character names Ross didn’t come up with.
Mr. Sayles — The second first sentence after Paula’s was discarded.
Brendan — Fancy vocabulary.
Kentaro — Spelling.
Ana — All Spanish.
Naomi — Symbols.
Xavier — Scheduling and motivation.
Gerry — Dialogue polishing.
Jan — Last sentence.
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